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Master_Theif
Joined: 09 Mar 2005
Posts: 7
Location: Canada
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Wed Mar 09, 2005 4:41 am |
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I made this place where people can post up there storys, cause I didnt see one any where else. I have a couple of rules here for storys. So please respect all the storys here,a nd do not give alot of negative feed back ok? Try and be nice to all other who posts up there storys, or poems any writing stuff can go up here.
1. Post storys that have been proof read, and no spelling erros.
2. Make sure that these storys are suitable for most ages on this site.
3. The final rules is, do not post to many comments on the story here, if you wish i will make a new topic where you can post comments on the story.
4. Enjoy reading! |
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Master_Theif
Joined: 09 Mar 2005
Posts: 7
Location: Canada
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Wed Mar 09, 2005 4:42 am |
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I am one of them, yet I do not know what I am, people are scared of me and they are not, who am I? Where am I? Those questions I do not know but there’s a rumor that someone knows all the answers to what has happened to us… the workers who lever leave work, the failures yet the winners, we are no one yet someone, I wish I knew the answers but I don’t only the boss knows the answers... I will ask the boss one day is aid to my fellow people and I will find about my LIFE!!!!! Everyone started laughing at me but I didn’t care I would find out and then I would laugh at THEM!!!! So I deiced on my first break I would go and find him the only that I would miss is getting free food and coffee. I’m walking down many hall ways and I'm not sure where I’m going but I keep walking as if my feet knew where to go, I should be scared but I’m not, as for some reason I fell I've been here some other time in my crappie, hopeless life! But then how come I have no memories of this place, it’s as if someone has taken them out of my head, no no no! It can’t be done never its impossible. I don’t care if someone finds me maybe they’ll kill me and end this crappie ass life I have here I don’t knew what would happen if they didn’t kill me maybe I would be thrown out or something worse but I cant think of anything at the moment, I just wish I knew where I was going, if only, if only I KNEW WHERE I WAS GOING!!!!! *BANG* what was that I spun around so fast I slipped and fell on the ground, I mange to look up and know I wish I didn’t there was this thing a big ugly thing in a suit, I don’t know why, it carried a huge axe in one hand and in the other some kind of long string that flashed colour and tried to break free from the hand of the creature, I tried to stand but I didn’t, I just lay there on the ground squirming to get out of the way... would I get flattened by one of its feet or, will I get chopped to death, but what bout that string what could it do????? But no the creature walked by me and went away I some how got to my feet and I followed it I got really close then the string went and tried to cut off my head! So know I stay back, I don’t know how long I’ve been going but I know I must follow this thing to find out the answers to my questions! Then it stopped in front of the wall it chanted something and went in, I ran into the hole, I was in darkness then a light went on and I could see him the boss! I couldn’t believe it he was one of us???? So I asked him my questions and he didn’t even have the answers, then it was a trick I had one more question from him what was that thing and he told me it was the creature that holds memoirs of everyone even the boss, no one could control the creature... I left all sad... I was almost back to the break room when that thing jumped in front of me with a strange grin on its face, it came up to me I screamed but I cant even hear my own voice it took the string and shoved it into me head and I felt all of the things I learned this day went out of my head and into the creatures body. I was left there to die but I didn’t someone came out and dragged me into a room where I fell asleep forever...............
Creator : Derek Beckett |
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Anti-Christ
Evil 0ne
Joined: 09 Mar 2005
Posts: 101
Location: Australia
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Wed Mar 09, 2005 4:50 am |
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I made this place where people can post up there storys, cause I didnt see one any where else. I have a couple of rules here for storys. So please respect all the storys here,a nd do not give alot of negative feed back ok? Try and be nice to all other who posts up there storys, or poems any writing stuff can go up here.
1. Post storys that have been proof read, and no spelling erros.
2. Make sure that these storys are suitable for most ages on this site.
3. The final rules is, do not post to many comments on the story here, if you wish i will make a new topic where you can post comments on the story.
4. Enjoy reading! |
Add me to msn and ill proof read ur stuff for u if im online quicksilver_truth@hotmail.com |
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Master_Theif
Joined: 09 Mar 2005
Posts: 7
Location: Canada
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Wed Mar 09, 2005 4:50 am |
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Another story i did, not as long and not as good.
This was a night just like any other night, or was it? Nothing seemed different I dragged my refusing feet into my cramped, uncivilized room where I'm sure many new kind of creatures have taken refuge into my pile of cloths, but I didn't care I limped onto my soggy bed and fell down and I fell into a sleep faster then the speed of sound. I'm running there’s something chasing me I can't see it but I know its there its all around me I’m trapped I don't know where to go I start to sweet I start crying not knowing what I’m crying for I stand up ready to fight what ever comes to attack me but, nothing came instead I was covered in darkness I couldn't see anything all of my fears when I was younger child came flying into my head I heard screaming, crying many other stuff I tried to fight it but I...I...I just couldn't I gave up my mind was warped and then I saw something coming form the darkness getting bigger....bigger! Panting my face covered in sweet I'm throwing my arms around me then I take a better look around me and I’m back in my room. The pitter patter of the rain on my window I got up walked slowly to my window I wipe of the water so I could see out and there then the sweet came splashing onto my face once again I saw it a black glowing shapeless charter staring up at me with blood eyes I fainted...
Creator : Derek Beckett |
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Anti-Christ
Evil 0ne
Joined: 09 Mar 2005
Posts: 101
Location: Australia
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Sat Mar 12, 2005 3:08 am |
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this is some really good work. (which is high prasss as im a booknut) i think u should really give u hand a smallish book. but rember PLAN IT |
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Dennis71
Joined: 22 Dec 2005
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